Comments from Mr Barton Set the scene more - close up of a bottle of pills in the foreground and James in the background.
Don't give away the plot reveal too much - dance around the fact that James can't tell the difference between fantasy and reality.
Have the April character as a figment of his imagination - Connor's visit gives him another episode about her. Allison can say "I'm here for you" etc
Cut the April character out completely. Connor can bring out a picture of his wedding day - tells him that they're married etc and that shocks him into reality - James starts thinking about the nurse.
Comments from Mr Barton
ReplyDeleteSet the scene more - close up of a bottle of pills in the foreground and James in the background.
Don't give away the plot reveal too much - dance around the fact that James can't tell the difference between fantasy and reality.
Have the April character as a figment of his imagination - Connor's visit gives him another episode about her. Allison can say "I'm here for you" etc
Cut the April character out completely. Connor can bring out a picture of his wedding day - tells him that they're married etc and that shocks him into reality - James starts thinking about the nurse.